Friday, April 15, 2011

Fireman credit...


It's saving life and also getting your job done. This is what i want to be in life a helping person. Doing something for my community, and doing something positive with my life. I also believe that fireman does get the credit that they need I believe that fireman should get paid more then what these unimportant people such as rapper. All rapper do is pollute are youth with negativity and they make million for that which fireman they save people life and also put there jeopardy which they need to get recognize for that.

Friday, April 8, 2011

Write Progress

My writing progress has improved by the terms I use and how I use the proper grammer. My vocab has improved a lot and Im not just putting words in the sentence. Im type faster, and putting comma, and semicolon in my article. I also make title pages that will have the audience fell like they reading a real story. I incorporate the new skills I learn this year in my article.

Friday, April 1, 2011

The Brainstorming


The brainstorming help me with my journal narratives. The journals I wrote about was a key to a successful journal narratives. They wasn't hard they were actually real easy I got done as fast as I started. I knew I had alot of miss spell word and a few error. But beside that it was a good experience.